Rewrites, Reboots, and so on

Hi everyone, time for an update!

So I’ve mentioned on social media about returning to Chidetan, but I’ve been mentally juggling whether returning to it would be worth it. To re-decide, I read what I started with, and was well…

Both upset with what I read but admired how far I’ve developed as a writer

I received comments from a friend that the start of the story is very slow, that there’s little gripping reason to keep a reader reading. Since this is being posted periodically, a weak beginning will kinda hamper chances to get new readers if I continue to update. So with that, I’m going to once again, keep Chidetan Odyssey on Hiatus, and try moving on with a few other things. Throwing some stuff at the wall to see what works.

Tales from Congeria is fairly well received, so that’s where I’m going to start. While I’m not the happiest when it comes to the intro for Joy and Simon since it’s nearly been a year since I wrote it as a kinda test thing, I’m at least content with the second part. So I’m going to re-write their intro.

I’ve already drafted up a rather action-packed chapter 3 for them both, had it for a while, and now I finally got time to work on it.

Along with that, I’m going to re-write the intro to Scott and Ferra as well, since I wrote it when I wasn’t as experienced as I was before. I’ve already drafted the new intro chapter, with a bit of nice action and interest about the vast world of Congeria to try and hook the reader.

Spending years studying literary analysis and practicing crafting worlds, I always saw myself as a fairly competent writer before. Now I’m glad to see the difference my year of work has made. While I’m still happy with my past in worldbuilding and storytelling, I’ve improved a lot when it came to prose. The most important thing I learned?
You gotta start with a good hook if you want to keep readers reading.

When I finally do return to Chidetan Odyssey, expect the first half of it to look brand new.

To all my readers, have a good week, and a happy Thanksgiving!

Where to continue next?

I’m finally wrapping up classes and settling into the flow of work, so hopefully I can get back into the flow of writing. Right now, I’m doing a favor for a friend, but once that’s wrapped up, I can move on to one of two options
1. Continuing Chidetan Odyssey

2. A continuation to Joy and Simon’s story from Tales from Congeria.

Let me know what you would like best

Brief update

Hey y’all, just wanted to give WordPress followers a brief update in case they don’t follow Twitter/Tumblr

As of late, I’ve been busy with classes and also a part time job. Needless to say, I’ve been caught up with work left and right, but I’m still trying to squeeze in writing whenever I can. Right now I’m working on a new short story and after that, I’ll return to the last of the Chidetan Odyssey proofreads and then actually continue it after quite a while of hiatus.

Take care, and hopefully I’ll have that short story done soon!